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And the sun should always set this way [Mar. 29th, 2004|09:18 pm]
not yet day


They hold each other in near silence for several minutes, close but not closenough out of habitual reluctance. They'll have to talk about This, about the unvoiced sentiment that compelled Viggo to travel thousands of miles on a seeming whim, just for This. But not yet. Not even soon.

They've said enough for now.

Viggo presses his nose behind Orlando's ear. The soft skin there still smells strongly sweet, a kind of burnt sugar scent that Viggo remembers achingly well. It used to make him toss at night whenever Orlando was near. He'd dream of cold mornings in New York, of bakeries and street vendors that sold candied nuts starting at dawn, of something rich and just a little unexpected that early in the day. It's a good smell, and on Orlando it always makes him crazy to fuck.

"You," Orlando mouths into the crook of Viggo's neck, and the almost admission makes Viggo all the crazier. He smiles madly into Orlando's hair.

Yeah, you is all Viggo can think, tired and sweaty and hard against an unfamiliar door frame in a small Spanish town, thank you for closed eyes with long lashes that tickle his chin, for thin hips that press so tightly against his own, for full body acceptance and answering lust, thank you thank you for you you you.

[User Picture]From: _ming
2004-07-30 06:44 pm (UTC)

We'd love hear what you think, so if you'd like to leave
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- beccaming and traveller
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[User Picture]From: cynical_terror
2004-07-30 07:38 pm (UTC)
Oh, so worth the wait. Lovely, gritty, wonderful.
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[User Picture]From: _ming
2004-07-30 08:03 pm (UTC)
Much thanks, peach pea. Much thanks indeed. <3
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[User Picture]From: ios_pillow_book
2004-07-31 06:33 am (UTC)

*insert sigh of delirious happiness here*

I've so waited for this to be continued.

This. Is. Perfect.

<3 <3 <3
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[User Picture]From: elis
2004-07-31 06:59 am (UTC)

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[User Picture]From: spillingvelvet
2004-07-31 08:27 am (UTC)

erm. good job, ladies. way to hit me with the teethy blowjob. *SMOOCH* *SMOOCH*
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[User Picture]From: lebannen
2004-07-31 11:08 am (UTC)
oh yes. it's beautiful.
and now I'm going to have to reread the whole lot to remember the details of how they got there, mmm. this is going to be a good evening after all, thank you for posting it!
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[User Picture]From: frisbyg
2004-08-02 07:40 pm (UTC)
"I know you need a lot, Vig, and that you like to keep things different. But if you mess me about, I'll forget about you."

*tears* simply stunning, you two, as always. i never have the right words for this piece because it is beyond them. <33
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[User Picture]From: laura_iskra
2004-08-03 06:55 am (UTC)
lost words
I've just read it as a whole and .. speechless..
the best phone sex ever

"sometimes I think you taste like home."
what viggo says, his thoughts.. so special..

and orlando is such a sweet and lovely and in love mess
waiting for the next parts,
sure they'll be worth the wait :p
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[User Picture]From: ancabell
2004-09-02 04:32 pm (UTC)
cant believe it took me so long to comment to this!
its wonderful, amazing, original, unique...guh! i could go on for days....
orlando is so at the end of his rope here, so torn between being delirious and grateful that viggo is finally there, and not really knowing what viggo being there means, and it all collapses on him...poor orlando. and viggo is..well, i thought, the things he says to orlando are so, realistic, even harshly so. its just unexpected but i think he's kind of helpless on seeing orlando cry...oh i could go on and on and im just rambling nonsensically, sorry!!
absolutely brilliant!
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